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指南者留學(xué) 邢丹(Dan)
2022年09月26日
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<p style="text-align: justify;">對(duì)無(wú)數(shù)夢(mèng)想著出國(guó)深造的學(xué)子來(lái)說(shuō),申請(qǐng)的過(guò)程就像一段荊棘蔓延、充滿岔路的旅途。在這段旅途中,想要達(dá)到最終的目的地,需要的除了智慧、勇氣,還要有征服困難的強(qiáng)烈信心。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">作為一個(gè)深耕法學(xué)專業(yè)領(lǐng)域的申請(qǐng)導(dǎo)師,初看J同學(xué)的硬件背景,實(shí)際上是比較過(guò)硬的。在國(guó)內(nèi)法學(xué)領(lǐng)域?qū)儆趥€(gè)中翹楚的武漢大學(xué),也是著名的“五院四系”之一,加上不錯(cuò)的均分成績(jī)和突出的語(yǔ)言,這也給了我們沖擊LSE、NUS等世界級(jí)名校的信心。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">然而,滿招損,謙受益。在學(xué)霸的眼中,自己仍然不夠優(yōu)秀,還有短板,這也許就是學(xué)霸之所以成為學(xué)霸的原因吧。</p>
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<h1><strong><span class="h1">比賽實(shí)習(xí)少,重點(diǎn)抓住細(xì)節(jié)展現(xiàn)實(shí)力</span></strong></h1>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">申請(qǐng)準(zhǔn)備階段,J同學(xué)告訴我,第一反應(yīng)是:完蛋,看到微博上同專業(yè)申請(qǐng)的朋友人人都均分89、90,人均三四段實(shí)習(xí)還都是“紅圈所”,人人都參加過(guò)jessup(國(guó)際法模擬法庭辯論賽)、vismoot(國(guó)際商事仲裁模擬仲裁庭系列賽)。相比之下,自己只有一項(xiàng)比賽和一項(xiàng)實(shí)習(xí)的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷似乎沒(méi)有任何亮眼之處可以講,甚至有些部分可能要大段空白。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">出于認(rèn)真仔細(xì)的個(gè)性,J同學(xué)除了參考我們的提綱,還自己到b站、知乎搜了特別多的文書(shū)模板,雖然眾說(shuō)紛紜,也沒(méi)有能快速知道要如何動(dòng)筆寫,但她初步形成了要有專業(yè)度,有故事性等概念。我也根據(jù)成功經(jīng)驗(yàn),給出了自己的意見(jiàn)供J同學(xué)參考。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">J同學(xué)雖然實(shí)習(xí)、競(jìng)賽不多,但我們可以揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短,<strong>重點(diǎn)抓住實(shí)習(xí)、競(jìng)賽中發(fā)生的某一件事,并且這件事她如何通過(guò)自己的專業(yè)思考、理論去解決,并引發(fā)了她對(duì)本專業(yè)某些知識(shí)的延伸認(rèn)知,</strong>這就形成了她所想要的兼具專業(yè)度和故事性的效果,并且展示了她的專業(yè)認(rèn)知能力和學(xué)習(xí)潛力。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">J同學(xué)根據(jù)我的批注和建議,最終形成了完善的提綱。比較頭疼的實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,總體思路是這樣的:J同學(xué)曾經(jīng)實(shí)習(xí)中遇到一個(gè)隱名股東的情形,通過(guò)一系列思考和專業(yè)分析,J同學(xué)以公司法中的某個(gè)規(guī)定解決了這個(gè)問(wèn)題,由此她認(rèn)識(shí)到公司法、合同法應(yīng)當(dāng)結(jié)合看待,保護(hù)公司利益和市場(chǎng)活力,這樣的實(shí)踐將有助于她的研究生關(guān)于商法部分的學(xué)習(xí)。由此就形成了一個(gè)既有故事性又有專業(yè)性的段落。</p>
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<h1><strong><span class="h1">課內(nèi)經(jīng)歷挖掘科研,順利收獲名校offer</span></strong></h1>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">此外J同學(xué)認(rèn)為缺乏的科研經(jīng)歷,這也可能是留學(xué)申請(qǐng)者中普遍沒(méi)有意識(shí)到,<strong>其實(shí)課程設(shè)計(jì)、結(jié)課作業(yè)、學(xué)年論文等經(jīng)歷都是可以挖掘的。</strong></p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">科研并非一定要是想象中高大上的競(jìng)賽和學(xué)術(shù)研究,<strong>而是展示你在這段研究經(jīng)歷中所展示的學(xué)術(shù)思考、專業(yè)知識(shí)、專業(yè)理論,這樣才能去適配申請(qǐng)專業(yè)。</strong>這一點(diǎn)和實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷一樣,不應(yīng)被局限在只要title好看、只要競(jìng)賽獲獎(jiǎng)、只要有學(xué)術(shù)成果。此外J同學(xué)的語(yǔ)言能力突出,法律英語(yǔ)的課程成績(jī)也較好,作為一個(gè)可以挖掘的點(diǎn),我們也在文書(shū)中做了細(xì)節(jié)部分的補(bǔ)充展示。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">經(jīng)過(guò)共同努力,J同學(xué)的提綱和英文文書(shū)以較快的速度準(zhǔn)備妥當(dāng),她對(duì)我們的文書(shū)質(zhì)量也非常滿意,沒(méi)有提出任何修改意見(jiàn)就確定了文書(shū),這也為之后的申請(qǐng)節(jié)省了時(shí)間,搶占了先機(jī)。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">感謝J同學(xué)的充分信任,在各專業(yè)陸續(xù)開(kāi)放申請(qǐng)后,她對(duì)我們的申請(qǐng)服務(wù)非常配合,雖然有些專業(yè)的申請(qǐng)流程略顯繁瑣,但良好的配合下我們有條不紊地提交了申請(qǐng)。接下來(lái)就是等待消息的日子。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">等待的時(shí)光顯得漫長(zhǎng)而不可預(yù)知,難免會(huì)讓人覺(jué)得焦慮。在我們的鼓勵(lì)下,J同學(xué)調(diào)整自己的心態(tài),繼續(xù)安排好自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。盡管看到了眾多優(yōu)秀條件的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)者,但在我們盡到了自己的努力情況下,陸續(xù)收到的滿意offer,也就顯得“意料之外,情理之中”。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">我們小時(shí)候經(jīng)常會(huì)聽(tīng)到“別人家的孩子”,雖然是一種動(dòng)力,但也何嘗不是壓力呢?我相信,只要不輕言放棄,運(yùn)用自己的智慧和勇氣,堅(jiān)持不懈地努力,就一定會(huì)有所收獲。驀然回首,或許我們也會(huì)成為他人口中“別人家的孩子”。</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">祝愿大家都能早日到達(dá)這段旅途的終點(diǎn),收獲心儀的offer。</p>
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