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指南者留學 沈樺鑫
2023年06月01日
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Hello</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">,我是<a href="http://walkingbarcodes.com/" target="_blank" rel="noopener">指南者留學</a>美研部門的文書老師</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Amanda</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">剛剛過去的</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">23Fall</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">申請季,跨專業(yè)申請的</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">學生收獲了比較超出預期的成績。作為體育類院校的新聞專業(yè)的學生,最終收獲了美國和香港多枚理學碩士的</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Offer</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">。很高興看到</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學實現了專業(yè)上的轉型,今天就和大家分享一下從文科專業(yè)到</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Tech</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">專業(yè)的文書準備過程,希望能夠給大家一點小小的啟發(fā)。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學來自北京體育大學的新聞專業(yè)。</span><strong><span style="font-family: Calibri;">GPA</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">排名比較好,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">11</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">月簽約后不久,就拿到了雅思</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">7.0</span></strong><span style="font-family: 宋體;"><strong>的成績</strong>,為后續(xù)定校、文書準備和申請奠定了一個順利的基礎。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">經過初次和</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學的溝通后我們了解到,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學高中是一名理科生,一直以來都對數學很有興趣。高考報志愿時,由于長期以來對競技體育抱有的熱情,加之在中國,女生對運動的熱愛比較低,運動的人和看運動的人都非常少,所以秉持著希望為中國體育事業(yè)奉獻的精神,她選擇了體育新聞專業(yè)。然而經過大一的學習,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學發(fā)現學校的課程設置比較偏文,上課時也沒有非常硬技術的學習,這與她喜愛的理科背道而馳。此外,體育大學關于<strong>理學的選修課近乎為零</strong>,這使她很難接觸到數學、計算機等領域的理工類課程。于是</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學在大一大二的空閑時間,一直堅持自學高等數學、線性代數等課程,也始終希望能夠在研究生階段轉回理科。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">而由于缺乏本科四年的積淀,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學無法在研究生階段學習理工基礎要求程度很高的專業(yè),而且她希望在未來從事更加實踐性的工作,因此決定在研究生階段申請商業(yè)分析項目,這也是現在十分熱門的專業(yè),十分適合文科轉專業(yè)的同學。同時,出于對新聞的興趣,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學也同時申請了有</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Tech</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">方面課程設置的人工智能與數字媒體專業(yè)。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span class="h1">二、完善文書,助力成功</span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">決定好方向之后,售后老師與</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學經過了充分的討論,確定好了申請的項目和國家組合之后,我就開始了文書的準備。寫作之前,我給</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學<strong>發(fā)送了需要她填寫的提綱</strong>,包括申請動機、學術經歷、實習經歷、職業(yè)規(guī)劃等幾個版塊。</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學十分配合,在約定好的時間內將填寫好的提綱發(fā)送給了我,非常詳細地闡述了自己的想法。之后,我與</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學進行了一次語音頭腦風暴,就整個</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">PS</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">的提綱進行了<strong>邏輯線的梳理</strong>。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">作為轉專業(yè)的學生,文書當中最難寫、同時也是十分重要的版塊,就是申請的動機。申請動機的合理性是除了硬三維之外一個比較關鍵的因素之一,招生官會依此來判斷你是不是真的對這個專業(yè)感興趣。同時,<strong>動機最好需要和學生自身的經歷結合,找到一個比較有說服力的切入點,而不能從專業(yè)本身的前景泛泛而談。</strong></span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">以羅切斯特大學西蒙商學院商業(yè)分析專業(yè)的文書為例,結合</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學的個人背景和經歷,以及她個人的想法,選擇了如下的切入點:</span></span></p>
<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">1. </span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">結合冬奧會的熱點,以及谷愛凌展現出的“</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">help girls connect with sports</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">”的形象,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學表明了自己當初也是抱著這樣想提升女性在競技體育行業(yè)的參與度的想法,選擇了體育大學的新聞專業(yè)(某種程度上體現美國學校很喜歡看到的</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">diversity</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">);</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">2. </span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">在如今這個數據驅動的世界里,新聞領域被技術顛覆了。在大二的一門課中,了解到了“數據新聞”的概念,在這門課的結課項目中,因為缺乏數據提取和可視化工具的技能,最終沒有能夠做出令自己很滿意的成果,這對</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學來說是一個遺憾,并且激發(fā)了在數據分析方面接受進一步教育的愿望(初次產生轉專業(yè)的想法);</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">3. </span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">大三期間,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學參與了一個交流項目,與來自不同專業(yè)、年級、國家的學生和老師一起生活和學習,互相影響。在這段經歷中,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學參與了體育賽事管理、體育品牌管理與營銷等多個課程,感受到了數據分析在體育行業(yè)的應用,如</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">......</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">。這段經歷讓</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學找到了未來想要從事的職業(yè),決定攻讀商業(yè)分析碩士,利用自己的跨學科知識有所作為。(加深動機,同時將數據分析和體育、商業(yè)都結合起來,確定職業(yè)規(guī)劃)。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: Calibri;">4. </span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">為了獲得一些數據相關的實踐,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學從大二暑假開始進行了共三段實習,掌握了一些常用軟件的基本技能,比如</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">SPSS, Python, MySQL, Tableau</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">等。(體現自己所做的準備)</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">總結下來,整體的邏輯主線仍然不脫離自己對體育行業(yè)的熱情,只是參與的方式從媒體領域轉變成了商業(yè)領域。在結合自身經歷闡述申請動機的同時,通過實習展現自己所作的努力和積累,也表明自己認識到自己現有的知識和技能儲備還不足以實現職業(yè)目標,所以決心通過商業(yè)分析的研究生進一步深造。這樣就形成了一篇比較完整的個人陳述。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span class="h1">三、最終申請,雙向奔赴</span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">在文書工作準備完成后,我們開始為</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學提交申請。不久之后,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學就收獲了香港和美國的多個</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">offer, </span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">不管是商業(yè)分析、管理學、還是人工智能與數字媒體,</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學都能夠繼續(xù)追求自己的興趣,在研究生階段進行</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Tech</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">技能的學習,同時增強自己未來畢業(yè)的求職競爭力啦。</span></span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0.0001pt; font-family: Calibri; font-size: 10.5pt; text-align: justify;"><span style="font-family: 宋體; font-size: 10.5000pt;"><span style="font-family: 宋體;">祝賀</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">Y</span><span style="font-family: 宋體;">同學即將開始一段嶄新的旅程,也期待著新的申請季各位小伙伴們都能夠如愿以償</span><span style="font-family: Calibri;">~</span></span></p>
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